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The complete guide to the common app personal statement | 2023-2024, write the common application.
Cassandra Cloutier
At Prompt, we’ve seen tens of thousands of smart applicants make the same mistakes on the Common Application Personal Statement (aka the Common App Essay).
- Mistake #1 — spending tens of hours on it, when a great essay takes just 5-6 hours .
- Mistake #2 — writing about things that admissions officers don’t care about (and leaving out the stuff they’d love to know).
- Mistake #3 — obsessing over metaphors, flowery language, and descriptive sentences that leave admissions officers cold (without investing the time to make the essays as clear as possible).
- Mistake #4 — getting derailed by feedback from people who don’t understand what admissions officers want.
To write a great personal statement, you have to know what admissions officers are looking for.
Once you understand your audience, this mystical-seeming process gets surprisingly concrete. And the results are powerful — we’ve found that 3 out of 4 students who use our plan get into one or more of their “reach” schools , where their academic qualifications are below the average admitted student.
This article is going to share the entire process with you.
One note: Use Prompt’s brainstorming and essay building tools – for free – if you’re ready to start your essay now. Just log into our college admission dashboard . You’ll get step-by-step guidance from brainstorming to writing your essay.
Common App essay format and word count
The Common Application has multiple sections, one of them being the personal statement essay. This is the infamous "college essay" that everyone talks about.
Common App Word Count: Essays can be no longer than 650 words and at least 250 words
Common App Essay Format:
- You need to tell a story with a beginning, middle, and end. You can use a standard five-paragraph essay structure for your Common App essay, but not necessary as long as you are telling a compelling story. (More later on how to do that!)
- We recommend you write your essay in a separate document before adding it into your Common App account. You can upload your essay straight from Google Docs.
- Make sure to add an empty line between each paragraph to separate them when you write because you can't indent in the text box with the Common App platform.
Formatting is important, but the quality of your content is more important. Believe it or not, we recommend brainstorming your most compelling experiences first before even choosing a prompt to write about. With that said, it's not a bad idea to take a look at the different options to help you think of different experiences during your time in high school.
Common App essay prompts for 2023 - 2024
Common App has announced the prompts for the graduating class of 2024. Here are the 7 Common App essay prompts to choose from:
- Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.
- The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?
- Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome?
- Reflect on something that someone has done for you that has made you happy or thankful in a surprising way. How has this gratitude affected or motivated you?
- Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.
- Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?
- Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you've already written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design.
OPTIONAL: There's a COVID-19 question within the Additional Information section that you can also write about.
Remember to choose the prompt that most inspires you and allows you to tell the most compelling story that you will succeed in college and beyond.
Admission officers read the personal statement for evidence you’ll succeed in college
Typical personal statement advice says you need to “tell your story,” or say “why you’re unique” and “what matters to you.” You’ll often hear that the essay is an opportunity for admissions to “get to know you.”
But is this advice helpful?
To answer that, we have to get into the minds of the colleges.
By the time an admission officer starts on your essay, they’ve seen your academic profile (test scores, GPA, strength of your curriculum). And, chances are, it’s similar to those of most other applicants: students self-select into schools where they have a good chance of admission. So your reader wants more .
Specifically, they’re evaluating your “personal qualities.” Will you be successful in college and beyond? Will you do well in your classes, and graduate? Admissions officers will mine many sources to get this answer: your activities (and how you write about them), your interviews, your recommendations, optional items such as portfolios, and, of course, your essays.
All of these things matter a lot. Moreover, at this stage in your high school career, you have more control over these aspects of your application than you do over things like grades (which are mostly in).
And the great news is that, when it comes to essays, there’s a simple way to show you’ll be successful — make it clear how you exemplify one or more of 5 key traits that colleges look for in admission essays :
- Drive — you push yourself to succeed no matter how long the odds.
- Intellectual Curiosity — you love learning for the fun of it.
- Initiative — you challenge the status quo, you take the lead to make things better.
- Contribution — you give back to your community.
- Diversity of Experiences — you have experiences or a background that give you a unique perspective.
You don’t need to exemplify all of the traits. Most students identify with 2-3, and your Common App essay should focus on just 1-2. (Often, as you write about one trait, you’ll naturally also showcase others. For example, essays about Intellectual Curiosity often also show Drive.)
For a tool to see which of these traits best describes you, head over to our college admissions page, create an account (it’s free), and take the test .
Bottom line: people aren’t wrong when they say you need to “tell your story” — but that advice leaves a lot out. You have many stories. To ace this essay, you need to tell the one(s) that shows you’ll be successful in college and beyond.
Choosing your prompt: Decide what to say, then choose the prompt that lets you say it
Did you notice that something exciting happened? As you read through the section above, whether or not you got started with our brainstorming tools , you probably came up with the germ of an idea about what you want your essay to say.
This is the right approach to the Common App essay. Only once you know which of the 5 traits you exemplify, and which experience best illustrate them, should you move on to choosing a prompt. (Luckily, there is literally a Common App prompt for every possible topic — there’s even a “choose your own.”)
This is counterintuitive. But we’ve seen that doing it the “normal” way (picking the prompt first) leads to a common mistake: choosing the wrong experience(s) to write about. By choosing a prompt you like first, you risk pigeonholing yourself into answering that specific question.
What you want to do is choose your very best experiences, the ones that best demonstrate your potential for college success. Optimize on content first, then select the prompt.
You can read about which of Common App prompts make for the best essays ; this article also says which prompt to consider for which types of situations. (We cover our favorite prompts for different types of experiences and traits.)
Avoiding common essay topic mistakes: Keep the focus on your potential for success
At Prompt, we review tens of thousands of essays every year. We’ve noticed a few mistakes that students make all the time when they choose what to write about. Consider this section a handy map to the most common traps we hope you’ll avoid.
Covering too much : 650 words is too short to tell a life story, but you’d be surprised at how many students make the attempt. Students struggle when they start talking about interesting things that unfortunately don’t relate to the 5 traits: their family history, their upbringing.
To avoid this mistake, keep that admissions reader firmly in mind. Focus on showing that you have the traits necessary to succeed in college and beyond.
Too much drama : Students often feel pressure to write about dramatic, unusual or even traumatic moments, such as death, depression, breakups, and bullying. The problem here is that the reader is often left thinking “ How is this relevant to being successful? ”
One way to avoid this mistake is to write about drama only if you can show you came out of it a better person, and have since taken action on what you learned from the experience. (Ex: you mastered anxiety, which enabled you to star in the school play.)
Also, bear in mind that you can show the 5 traits through things that may feel small — for example, an interaction with peers that provides a glimpse into how you think and add value to your community.
Your love of [sports/music/theater] : Students often focus their essays on a particular passion. The problem is that a passion alone doesn’t prove much about your potential for future success.
But, your love of music could form the basis of a great essay if it exemplifies, say, Drive — how you practice for hours every day outside of normal practice; or you’ve learned an instrument on your own; or you’ve written or recorded your own music.
Or, you might use music to exemplify Initiative — your high school had no band when you started as a freshman, but you helped get one up and running; or you took it over and raised its profile. If you tie your passion to one of the 5 traits, you’ll do great.
Writing a resume : Resist the urge to pack in every one of your impressive accomplishments. It’s not just that these are best suited to the common app activities list. It’s also that listing an accomplishment can obscure how you exemplify one or more of the 5 traits.
For example, let’s say you won a debate award. Talking about that award alone makes you come off as a natural. That won’t impress college officers — they think things will be harder for you as you enter college and the real world; you’ll probably crumble if you’re used to things coming easy.
Instead, talk about the hard work and practice that helped you earn your award. That’s shows Drive! Now the officer is seeing you as a gritty and determined person who persevered through challenges to win an award, and will keep doing so to do great in college and life.
Save time with an outline that sets you up for success
Using an outline saves students at least one draft and leads to more compelling essays. In our experience, students using outlines typically need just two drafts, versus three or four for those who don't. (If you like the idea of structuring your essay in these ways, take a look at this complete guide to outlining a personal essay.)
When it comes to the Common App personal statement, two basic structures work wonders:
- The Journey — for essays that show a clear progression of personal growth (ie: There was a Before You, now there's an After You). The most important part of this essay is what you went on to do AFTER the experience of growth. Which actions did you take that prove you’re a changed person? (It’s surprisingly common for people to leave the critical post-experience part out.)
- The Theme — for essays that show either (a) how you developed one important trait over many distinct experiences or (b) one meaningful passion over time. In this case, the aim is to describe a number of distinct experiences over which you developed or showcased a trait or passion.
Take a look at our outline blog post for exact, prescriptive descriptions of what to write where, and how long each section should be.
Or, if you’re feeling ready to get started, login to the Dashboard for our free Common App brainstorming tool which will provide you with the best outline for the experiences you choose.
Timeline: You can actually get the whole essay done in a week
We have to hide this section down in the blog post. That’s because otherwise it sounds too good to be true. Like we’re selling you on something. But, hopefully, by now you’re catching on to the method behind our madness.
Most applicants’ essays take forever to write. That’s because they don’t know what colleges are looking for. They’re stabbing in the dark, trying to be impressive. But you know about the 5 traits; you’ve got our time-saving, essay-shaping outlines; and (as you’ll see soon), you’ve got our advice for getting the right kind of feedback on the right things.
All of this is making you into an efficient, essay-writing machine (particularly if you get started through our Dashboard ). With time left over to work on the other pieces of your all-important non-academic “personal” score (activities list, recommendations, and all the rest).
So here’s our big reveal — the Prompt process in a nutshell:
- Day 1: Brainstorm content (45 minutes).
- Day 2: Create an outline (30 minutes).
- Day 2: Write the first draft (45 minutes).
- Day 3: Get feedback — focused on content and structure — and revise (75 minutes).
- Day 5: Get more feedback — focused on writing clarity — and revise again (30 minutes).
- Day 6: Most students get a third round of feedback — focused on confirming/improving readability. Sometimes, an outside reader can also help you make cuts to get within word count. And revise (30 minutes).
- Day 8: Final read-through and polish (60 minutes).
In terms of the feedback you’ll need, if you want a professional to do it for you, think about having one of our writing coaches help you nail it.
Your first draft: Get rid of distractions, use an outline, and don’t worry about the rest (yet)
To be successful here, go somewhere without distractions. Get away from loud family members, the TV, and most especially your phone!
The only thing you really need is your outline. To make it even easier, get your draft set up via our outlining tool , once you log-in to Prompt for free.
Now just write. Don’t worry about:
- Spelling errors
- Perfection.
All of those are easy to fix later. Once you’ve done, the important work of feedback and revision can begin.
Feedback: Ask guided questions of your reviewers, or they’ll get you off track
Surprisingly, feedback is a big pitfall. We see essays go off track all the time, as too many reviewers focus on all the wrong things. (Grammar and phrasing, instead of potential to succeed.)
But feedback is also critical. The trick is to give your reviewer clear instructions. Ask them to answer these questions:
- What did they learn about you? What traits do they see depicted here?
- What didn’t they learn that they wanted to know? (What content do you still need to add in?)
- How can you restructure the essay to make it clearer? (Is it readable? Easy to follow? Is it clear where this essay is headed from the beginning? Or does the essay take a confusing turn somewhere?)
Direct your reviewer not to focus on grammar. Tell them instead to circle where they found your writing to be unclear. Explain that you’re probably going to be making substantial changes, so grammar feedback isn’t helpful at this point — that will come later.
And choose your reviewer with care. You want someone who’ll stay focused on the task at hand, and not get you bogged down with their ideas about the Oxford comma and splitting infinitives. You want a thoughtful, careful reader. Someone who’ll spot gaps in your logic. And you also want someone who either knows what admissions people are looking for (or can be taught).
You might choose a parent or your super-smart aunt, or a teacher you respect. If you think an experienced writing coach might help, take a look at our process , and see if it would work for you.
Revising your draft: You may need to start again from scratch, but you can do it
Armed with excellent, content- and structure-focused feedback, you’ve got what it takes to win the battle of the personal statement. There’s no hiding that this process is hard, but here are a few ways to make it as valuable as possible:
- Consider all the feedback before you make any changes.
- New topic? It’s possible you might want to switch to a new topic that better lets you show off how you exemplify one or more of the 5 traits.
- New outline? Also, consider whether you should overhaul the structure or write a new outline.
Finally, many students need a “radical revision” at this early stage. It sounds awful, but it’s actually … not. If you start again, you’ll find that you keep in the good stuff from your first draft, but that your writing flows much better as you write it again. Being radical usually saves time over trying to completely move things around — and gets much better results.
Get more feedback focused on writing clarity, and revise again
Now that you’ve got a winning structure and content that compellingly proves you exemplify some of the 5 traits, let’s make sure your admissions officer can follow it.
If possible, stick with the same reviewer. (It simplifies things to just have one, and you don’t have to retrain them.)
You can ask the exact same questions as before, but this time the focus will hopefully be more on the clarity — ask them to circle unclear passages and help you find ways to make your essay flow logically.
As you revise, now is a good time to think about writing style ...
Writing style: Admissions officers love nothing more than clear, straightforward writing
To repeat the most important insight in this blog post: essays are about showcasing your ability to succeed in college and beyond. Admissions officers are taking notes on what you write about — not grading you on your writing style.
Avoid being overly flowery. Beautiful metaphors, clever analogies, and the rest of the literary arsenal tend to get students in trouble. They distract from clearly illustrating the experiences that prove you'll be successful in college and beyond.
In your writing, think about:
- Clarity — your reader gets what you’re trying to say.
- Flow — the reader gets where the essay is heading from the start; the ending feels natural.
- Engaging style — the reader wants to keep reading because the text is easy to follow thought-by-thought, the sentence structures vary, vocabulary is simple and effective, useful anecdotes illustrate your points, and there are no jarring grammatical errors.
Clarity : Probably the most important quality for your writing. As we said above, the best way to know if you have been clear is to get someone who doesn’t live in your head tell you if they can follow along. But always keep clarity in mind as you review and polish your draft.
Flow : Wouldn’t it be fun to jump on a raft, and watch a beautiful landscape float by, until you got off somewhere nice? Yes, it would. Your essay should be just like that.
Take the time to ensure that every thought connects logically to the next. For each sentence, even each phrase, ask yourself: “ How is this relevant ?” Cut anything irrelevant, and make clear why everything in your essay relates to the main point (about your potential for success). Also look at whether your essay raises any questions that don’t get answered.
You want your reader to follow along effortlessly. A few more tips:
- Intros really matter — begin your essay on a theme that’s directly relevant to the main experience you’re describing.
- Use guiding sentences to help give a sense of where the essay is likely heading.
- Conclusions matter, too — Your ending shouldn’t come out of nowhere. To assess your conclusion, look back at your intro: while it shouldn’t give away the full ending, the course that your essay will take should be set right at the start. Your ending should feel inevitable.
Engaging style : You want your reader to want to keep reading. There are lots of pieces to this, including:
- Killing adjectives : We talked about avoiding flowery language. One great tip on that comes from Mark Twain who said, “ When you catch an adjective, kill it. ” Try it. It works.
- Use everyday vocab: First, this makes your essay easier to read. Your reader will demonstrate gratitude. Just kidding! How annoying was that last sentence? I meant: “Your reader will thank you.” Second, if you misuse a vocab word your reader may lose patience with you.
- Vary sentence structures: Take a minute to go through your sentences. Are they all kind of long? Throw in a few shorter ones. If they’re all pretty simply, make a few of them a little more complex. And make sure you don’t start every sentence with “I.” In other words, take a moment to introduce some variety. (This is kind of fun, actually.)
- Grammar kinda matters: Really big errors can have a dramatic affect on readability. Read carefully to catch the big things like subject-verb agreement, missing words (even small ones, such as “to,” “in,” etc. ...), incorrect verb conjugations, fragments or run-ons. On the other hand, don’t lose sleep over more subtle things like commas and hyphens. Do your best, and get a second opinion, but this is more minor. In fact, most admissions types don’t directly evaluate grammar. (See the University of California’s “ writing tips ” as an example.)
Final feedback & revision round: Read it out loud and, sure, you can worry about grammar now
After two rounds of feedback and revision, you should be in the home stretch. Your content, structure, and clarity should all be there at this point.
Usually, at this point, students are struggling with much more minor issues such as grammar and spelling errors. They’re often still over the word count. So here’s how to handle the last pieces of the process.
- Get within the word count. One way to cut easily is to jot down the most essential elements of your essay. This will help you see — and chop — everything that’s extraneous. The other way is to ask your reviewer to help you see what’s cuttable.
- Read the whole thing out loud. This is one of the best ways to expose unclear writing. You’ll probably stumble across long and overly complex sentences. Cut these down — a good hint is to break up any sentence that goes to 3 lines or has more than 4 commas.
- Use a grammar checker to spot remaining errors. Often, a human grammar checker is more trustworthy than one made of code.
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How to Write a Common App Personal Statement
Personal statement examples, tips, tricks, and advice.
June 01, 2020 by Veritas Essays Team | Essays , Common App , How To , Essays
This article discusses the seven Common App essay prompts, analyzes how to write a Personal Statement, and offers suggestions on how to go about conquering this critical essay.
The Common App Personal Statement is the centerpiece of your college application.
It will be sent to every school to which you apply.*
It is extremely broad, allowing you to write on literally any topic you want.
It is also the longest unfiltered, uninterrupted stream of information in your application (650 words).
This makes the Common App Personal Statement the perfect place to fill in any holes in your application, round yourself out as an applicant, and showcase a side of your personality that doesn't come through elsewhere.
With so much that can be accomplished and such broad license to write whatever you want, however, your Personal Statement for college can seem overwhelming at first glance.
The Personal Statement is an essay of no more than 650 words, and no less than 250 words, that should tell a story about yourself that is not included elsewhere in your application.
As the Common App's instructions for the Personal Statement state:
"The essay demonstrates your ability to write clearly and concisely on a selected topic and helps you distinguish yourself in your own voice. What do you want the readers of your application to know about you apart from courses, grades, and test scores? Choose the option that best helps you answer that question and write an essay of no more than 650 words, using the prompt to inspire and structure your response. Remember: 650 words is your limit, not your goal. Use the full range if you need it, but don't feel obligated to do so. (The application won't accept a response shorter than 250 words.)"
Right away, the first piece of advice to prospective applicants is to ignore the Common App's obligatory note and use the full range of space .
Of course, there is no need to hit exactly 650 words.
But if you are hitting anything less than 620 words, then you are putting yourself at a substantial disadvantage to students who do fill their entire allotted space.
By not getting as close to 650 as possible, you are potentially leaving out several sentences or descriptive phrases that could add significant weight and polish to your essay.
Thus, you should always write your Common App drafts over the word limit , then cut to get your essay to 650 words.
If you find yourself stuck at, for example, 600 words and can't come up with 50 more words to say about whatever story you are telling, then that is probably a bad sign for how interesting that story is going to be for your admissions reader.
The seven 2020 Common App essay prompts have been reproduced below and grouped together for ease of analysis.
Personal Background
1) Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.
Prompt #1 is the broadest prompt offered by the Common App, and thus can offer the best launching point for a variety of powerful personal stories.
This Prompt offers a great opportunity to round out your application by discussing something not mentioned elsewhere in your application.
You can talk about your family, your heritage, a hobby, an interpersonal relationship that's impacted you, or any interests that were deemed too "non-academic" to make it into your Extracurriculars List.
Alternatively, you could choose to write about something already covered in your application (e.g. your experience doing research at a hospital, or working a part-time job), but in a way that sheds light on your personal motivations/connection to the subject rather than the scope of your achievement.
A common pitfall with this Prompt is to simply rehash an "interest or talent" that has already been covered in your application.
If you do decide to spend these 650 words on an activity mentioned elsewhere in your application, you need to constantly ask yourself: What new information does the reader gain that couldn't already be inferred from my transcript/rec letters/extracurriculars list?
For example, let's imagine you do debate. A Personal Statement about how you overcame the competition and won the National Championship would be interesting, but likely doesn't break any new ground in the mind of the admissions officer.
They already know you are great at debate, so unless this essay were tweaked to focus more on your personal growth or relationship with others, it likely won't help your admissions chances.
Overcoming Adversity
2) The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience? 3) Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome? 5) Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.
Prompts #2, 3, and 5 all ask for you to describe an episode in your past that spurred some sort of personal growth.
These Prompts may require a bit more brainstorming effort on your part.
However, don't feel stumped if nothing immediately strikes you.
If you've lived on earth for more than 16 years, then I guarantee you have faced and overcome at least one obstacle or challenge that is worth reading a 650-word essay on.
Don't be afraid to ask family members, friends, or teachers/mentors for their thoughts; you'd be surprised how effective the recollections of others are at jogging your memory.
The best part about writing an essay around one of these Prompts is that it naturally avoids the major pitfall of Prompt #1 (re-listing accomplishments detailed elsewhere on your application). It forces you to focus on an instance of adversity you've faced in life, and to build your narrative arc around your own personal growth.
The three universal components of any story are (1) a beginning, (2) a climax, and (3) a resolution.
By using one of these Prompts as a start, you've already guaranteed that your essay will hit at least two of these three core elements of story-telling; namely, the "obstacle[]" or "time" or "accomplishment, event, or realization" that you discuss will be your Personal Statement's climax, and "what...you learn[ed] from the experience" will be its resolution.
Starting with one of these prompts is more restrictive than starting with Prompt #1.
You may find it limiting at first to brainstorm ideas that fit these Prompts, so it may be helpful to first start brainstorming ideas for Prompt #1 and then seeing if any of them fit under these Prompts.
These types of essays can be among the most compelling when executed properly.
However, there are a couple common mistakes that students commit when writing stories about overcoming personal adversity, pitfalls that you should work hard to avoid when crafting your own essay.
First, at the brainstorming stage:
There are millions of high school students across the US applying to college every year. Relatively speaking, the vast majority of these students will have shared similar experiences and overcome similar challenges.
Did you place first in an athletic competition? Did you win a debate tournament? Did you conquer your fear of public speaking? Odds are, so have millions of other students your age.
That's not to say that your situation wasn't unique, or that the lessons you learned weren't meaningful.
But when an admissions officer is reading 100's of essays a week, the nuances get blurred and only the highest-level themes stay fresh in the mind.
If your essay can be summed up as, "I practiced hard, overcame adversity, and won X competition," then you likely will not stand out from the pack.
So when choosing the "accomplishment, event, or realization" that you discuss, make sure it is unique enough that an admissions officer will not be able to readily group it into an abstract category of essays that other high school-age students have written.
Second, at the execution stage:
The experience of overcoming adversity and subsequently undergoing a period of reflection and personal growth is a very abstract, nuanced phenomenon that can be difficult to properly articulate.
It is also an experience that has been written about by almost every writer on earth. But not every writer has the ability to distill these experiences into words.
Thus, there have been hundreds -- if not thousands -- of cliches, trite imagery, and hackneyed phrases that have been developed in the English language and recycled ad nauseum .
"It was at that moment that I truly understood the saying that you can't judge a book by its cover..."
"But I knew that my actions would speak louder than my words, so I..."
"Losing the Spelling Bee may have knocked me down momentarily, but I understood that failure was only the first step towards success..."
If a phrase in your essay could be trademarked and hung on a motivational poster, you should probably remove it. Make sure to avoid cliches when writing about your experiences, otherwise the full weight of how you are such a unique and special person will not come through in your writing.
Describe an Intellectual Issue
4) Describe a problem you've solved or a problem you'd like to solve. It can be an intellectual challenge, a research query, an ethical dilemma - anything that is of personal importance, no matter the scale. Explain its significance to you and what steps you took or could be taken to identify a solution. 6) Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?
Both of these Prompts ask you to describe an intellectual "problem" or "concept" that you are interested in, as well as your personal connection to that concept.
If you've done academic research, been involved in political advocacy, did debate, founded a business or charity, or developed a product, these could be the perfect Prompts for you.
Prompts #4 and #6 allow you to show the admissions officers what truly makes you tick by showcasing aspects of your personality that might not come through elsewhere in your application.
Is your GPA lower, or do you think you're fighting an uphill battle to show the admissions committee that you're a serious scholar? Use these 650 words to dispel their doubts by showing how knowledgeable about a topic you can be when you've set your mind to it.
Human intelligence takes forms, and the problems you're interested in solving may not be reflected on your transcript. These Prompts allow you to really highlight the "spike" of your application and show why you are THE person for topic X or issue Y.
These essays tend to verge on the impersonal, as students get caught up in describing the minutiae of the intellectual challenges they are tackling.
Given free rein to "describe a topic...so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time," many students also lose track of the word count, and end up with an essay that is 500-words of Wikipedia-summary-level content on an academic topic, and 150 words about the author herself and her passion for the subject.
The admissions reader is not looking to admit a class of textbook authors.
Given the very nature of the Common App Personal Statement (literally a "Personal" Statement), the most important part of Prompts #4 and #6 are actually their second halves; namely, how you relate to and have addressed the topic that you write about.
For example, if you are writing about a controversial topic like immigration or criminal justice reform, remember that you're not writing an Op-Ed for a newspaper advocating for your side.
The Personal Statement is not an exercise in persuasive writing. Rather, you should discuss your own involvement in these issues, the people you've met through your experience, and how they have collectively shaped your worldview.
Anything Goes
7) Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you've already written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design.
If you can't think of an essay that falls under any of the other Prompts (which would be quite an accomplishment), then Prompt #7 serves as a catch-all that lets you write about literally anything you want.
You can write about anything.
Unless you already have a very well-written essay that doesn't fit under any of the other Prompts, I would not recommend that you choose this Prompt.
First, it will make it harder for you to focus your essay.
The 6 Prompts offered by the Common App are very good, very broad prompts.
They offer tremendous flexibility while also putting the necessary bumper rails on your essay that ensure it is at least passable.
Writing a Personal Statement that doesn't address anything covered by the 6 aforementioned Prompts means that your essay does not include an instance of personal growth, an interest/passion, an achievement, or an obstacle you've overcome.
If your essay does not have any of these elements, 99.99% of the time it will either be (a) uncompelling to the reader or (b) fail to add positive information to your application.
Another issue with choosing this Prompt is that the admissions officer reading your file will also not know what prompt your essay is trying to address.
Choosing one of Prompts #1-6 will immediately flag for the admissions reader what your essay is about, and what she should be looking for.
Neglecting to specify a Prompt puts an additional burden on the reader to sift through your writing and assess what its key themes are, taking attention away from your actual writing.
* Even for schools that do not require it, you are still given the option to submit your Common App Personal Statement with your application.
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