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The goal of Excellence in Writing is to make writing part of what your students are learning, not a course unto itself. With nine structural units, you can easily plan your year of writing using sources from your history, science and literature.
Our teacher’s course, Teaching Writing: Structure and Style ®, incrementally trains teachers and parents to mentor their children in writing. Instead of providing multiple writing prompts, our program details nine structural units that students can use to write reports and stories related to what they are studying. With these powerful tools, students are empowered to manage any writing prompt and will no longer complain, “I don’t know what to write!”
Fortunately, teachers do not need to watch the entire course to get started. All you need to do is watch the first teacher’s disc and practice it with your student. There is even a Student Workshop that introduces Units 1 and 2 along with a few dress-ups so you can get started right away. To make lesson planning even easier, Structure and Style for Students includes ready-made lessons with all of the student instruction presented on video.. If you would like to do the teaching yourself with sources related to what you are studying, check out our Theme-Based Writing Lessons. With either of these, the lesson planning is all done. You will spend about an hour once a week teaching the lesson, and then students will need thirty minutes a day during the remainder of the week to complete the writing assignment.
What might a year of writing look like? Generally, you will spend 1–2 months per structural unit. Elementary students will spend more of their time in the early units while more mature students will spend more time in the upper units. All students begin with Unit 1 and progress incrementally through them all. By alternating between fiction and non-fiction, students have the opportunity to practice a variety of skills. Teachers can cycle through the units every year, helping their students deepen their writing. It's so effective! It works so, so well. I can't imagine that people would want to teach writing any other way.
September/October Units 1 and 2: Key Word Outlines and Writing from Notes Using paragraphs from your history, science, and literature books, your student will learn to create an outline and use that outline to write paragraphs. This is a good unit to introduce some of the easy “dress-ups” such as the who/which clause and the “-ly” adverb. These are presented one at a time and practiced until they are mastered.
October/November Unit 3: Story Sequence Your student will learn to organize a story in its three sequential parts. Aesop's fables, fairy tales, and historical stories make great sources for this unit. If students have mastered the dress-ups so far, then more can be introduced such as quality adjectives and strong verbs.
November/December Unit 4: Summarizing a Single Reference Now it is time to pull out the encyclopedia and learn how to write reports from a single reference. The importance of having a topic sentence at the beginning and a clincher sentence at the end of the paragraph is taught. Students can report on animals, states, famous people, places, or events they are studying in their other subjects. The adverb clause and because clause could be presented if students are ready for them.
January/February Unit 5: Writing from Pictures Students enjoy this creative writing unit, where they learn to take three sequential pictures and write a three-paragraph report on them. Some students might like to draw their own pictures for writing. Sentence patterns to increase sentence complexity can now be introduced if students have mastered the dress-ups. Start with the #1 subject and #2 prepositional openers.
February/March Unit 6: Summarizing Multiple References Young students may choose a few elementary books on animals while older students begin library research on subjects such as famous people and events. Instead of wrestling with note cards, students are taught how to organize their work using the outline technique that has been taught all along. For style, the #3 “-ly” adverb and #5 adverbial clause sentence openers can be introduced.
March/April Unit 7: Creative Writing Learning to create an outline from the information in their brain, students discover how to write on a variety of topics related to things they already know. Mature students will learn the Basic Essay model. The tricky #4 “-ing” opener can be introduced along with its grammar rules. The #6 Very Short Sentence pattern is also taught, completing the sentence openers.
April/May Unit 8: Essay Middle and high school students will learn how to write research essays (term papers) using this unit. After all the preparation of Units 1–7, students usually find this manageable. If they have mastered all their dress-ups and sentence openers, decorations are added.
May/June Unit 9: Critique Instead of writing painful book reports, students will discover how to critique a story. If students are ready, some of the advanced style techniques of triples and teeter-totters can be presented and practiced.
Next Year Move through the nine units again using different source materials connected with content areas (history, science, etc.).
This article first appeared in the 2010 Arts of Language Magalog for Families & Groups. © 2010, Institute for Excellence in Writing, L.L.C. The above article is available for your personal use or for distribution. Permission given to duplicate complete and unaltered.
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the act of writing a movie script. genre. A category of writing characterized by a particular style, form, or content. compression. when writers convey a lot of meaning using only a few words. vignette. A short story or description. Gives a strong, lasting impression about a character, place, or idea. flash fiction.
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brainstorm. to come up with as many ideas as possible, and write them all down. inspiration. a burst of creativity or the source of a creative idea. "ringing the bell". draft. the early version of a piece of writing. edit. to make changes to a piece of writing, including checking for grammar, punctuation, and spelling mistakes and making sure ...
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Welcome to ENG 542 Creative Writing! In this course, you will explore writing techniques, practice different types of writing from poetry to memoir to fiction, challenge and understand writing conventions, revise multiple drafts, and present your final product.
This five-unit creative writing course which contains the following units with handouts, PowerPoint Presentations, Instructional techniques, Peer Critique forms, Rubrics for self- and teacher evaluation, and brainstorming activities. The Schedule outlines day-by-day lesson planning for each unit.
An easy lesson plan for creative writing that will pay off later is to activate prior knowledge. Brainstorm creative, memorable, unforgettable stories with students. Share your thoughts too! You will start to build relationships with students who share the same tastes as you (and those that are completely different!).
owing, symbolism, dramatic irony, exposition, rising action, crisis, climax. d denouement.Drama is another genre that writers can use to create character and meaning.Ma. and novel are present in the dra. .Drama is a unique genre that has endured for centuriesWhy has humankind.
Of course there are dozens more wonderful possibilities for creative writing units. You could write screenplays, memoirs, graphic novels, children's books, nursery rhymes, fairy tales. You could explore writing scifi, fantasy, mystery, YA, and more. You could dive into poetry with spoken word, slam, and blackout poetry.
In Paper 1 Question 5 you will be presented with a choice of two writing tasks and a stimulus image. One task will ask you to write descriptively, most likely based on the image, and the other question will ask you to write a story, based on a statement or title. The task requires you to write for a specific purpose and in a specific form.
ANALYSING A CREATIVE COMPOSITION. Creative writing is the process of inventing or rather presenting your thoughts in an appealing way. The writer thinks critically and reshapes something known into something that is different and original. Each piece of writing has a purpose and is targeted at an audience.
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Students enjoy this creative writing unit, where they learn to take three sequential pictures and write a three-paragraph report on them. Some students might like to draw their own pictures for writing. Sentence patterns to increase sentence complexity can now be introduced if students have mastered the dress-ups. Start with the #1 subject and ...
Start by writing a summary of your story in 1 paragraph. Use each sentence to explain the most important parts of your story. Then, take each sentence of your paragraph and expand it into greater detail. Keep working backward to add more detail to your story. This is known as the "snowflake method" of outlining.